Day : 15 year criminal that lives on the streets with his friend Tess and stealers to help his family and other poor people really name is Daniel Altan Wing
June: 15 year old genius attending Drake University a military training school lived with her brother until he was murdered
Tess: orphan that works with Day
Days family : John : older brother who knows Day is alive
Eden : young sick brother
Mom: Day's resourceful mother
Metias Iparis: June's brother and a captain in the republic, he keeps analog journals.
Thomas: Metias's disciplined, former driver, he has a romantic feeling for June.
Commander Jameson: Metias's sadistic former commander. She recruits June after Metias's murder.
Ollie: June's beloved white shepherd dog.
Chian: a republic official who administrates the Trial.
Kaede: a flirty bartender and accomplished Skiz fighter. She is a member of the patriots.
Anden: the elector Primo's handsome son.
Emerson Adam Graham: a colonies spy who is captured by the republic.
Dorian: a student at drake who has a crush on June.
Arisna Whitaker: the dean secretary of Drake University.
Good job. It is short and to the point, but not overly wordy. I wish you had included a little more info, but overall, I think it is OK as is....
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