Sunday, June 1, 2014
My Character & I -Sarah
In the book Legend the girl named Tess really connects to me. She was abandoned at a young age and was taken in by Day and he took care of her. She is caring and very kind to everyone especially to Day. Now she's more grown up she takes care of Day. She is very protective of day because she depends on him because if she lost him she'd be lost. My parents never abandoned me but they took care of me and I'm very protective, loving, and caring of them. I depend on them and it wouldn't know what I'd do without them. They raised raised me like Day raise Tesd. Tess has long hair that is a brown, tan skin with big brown eyes. I have brown hair and wish I had tan skin which is another thing we relate on!
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I think that you could have definitely made sure the art piece was on a different material, so that it would be clearer. I also think you could have made sure it was turned the right way for easier viewing. You have some major grammar mistakes in this part, but I like that you were able to create a connection in your writing.
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